Today you read the short story, The Crush by Rachel Veil. You have one question to answer on the blog. Be sure to fully answer the question. 1. Based on the information in this text, what would probably have happened if the main character had not picked Gabriela up and taken her to the nurse? Why do you think this would have happened? Use information from the story to support you answer.
What You Need to Do;
1. Write a topic sentence that tells what would have happened next in the
story if the events had been changed the way the question says.
2. Write one or two sentences that tell one reason why this would have
happened based on other events in the story.
3. Write one or two sentences that give a second reason why this would
have happened based on other events in the story.
4. Tell how this change would have affected the outcome of this story.
DON'T FORGET TO PUT YOUR NAME AT THE END OF YOUR COMMENT AND READ
OVER YOUR WORK TO EDIT AND REVISE BEFROE POSTING!
If the boy hadn't pick her up maybe some one else would have and she would had falling in love with some one else and he would had never got to talk to her and she would had never liked him.
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If the boy diden't take Gabrielle to the nuse she might not like him and he might have not talk to her and then some one might pick her up and tack her to the nuse and she might like them.So he was smart to tack her to the nuse .
ReplyDeleteIf the main character had not picked Gabriella up and taken her to the nurse. I think Gabriella would never ever looked or talk to the young boy ever again. And probably the young boy wouldn't even care about her getting hurt.-Mayah
ReplyDeleteIf the event in this story or situation had been changed the way the question says, the next thing to happen would probably be that the boy will never speak with the girl and she will probably slap him and be mad at him.One reason this would have happened is because he didn't pick her off the ground and because he would just left her there.Another reason this might have happened is because he didn't take her to the nurse and her knee would might get affected.Even the ending may change. Here is what would probably happen she will star sitting with him at lunch and start to talk together.
ReplyDeleteBased on the information in this text, what would probably have happened if the main character had not picked Gabriella up and taken her to the nurse she would have never fell in love with the boy and he would never get to talk to her. -Jhannah r.
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ReplyDelete1. I think the Narrator would not have had a chance to actually talk to Gabriella and she would bleed pretty bad and it would hurt. Also, they would not have met, even though they been in a class together in 2nd grade. Garrett
ReplyDeleteI think if he hadn't picked her up her split knee would have got infected because of all the gunk and blood.She would also have passed out and the would have never talked.By Tyrique
ReplyDeleteI think if the main character did take Gabriela he would not get to hold her.Also he would not had the gust to talk to her. Not only that but Mike would have end taking her to the nurse and mike would and Gabriela because mike and Gabriela have a lot in common like there both in the top math class.Moli,M
ReplyDeleteIf the events in this story had changed the way the question says, the next thing to happen would probably be that she would have laid there until the nurse came. One reason this would have happened is because he probably doesn't want to get in trouble because he hurt her. Another reason this might have happened is because someone might have seen him hurt her and told on him. Even the ending may change. Here is what would probably happen: She would limp to the nurse and the boy would have forgotten what had happened.
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If the main character had not picked Gabriela up, I think one of the students would have called a teacher over. Then they all would have gotten in trouble because The game Salugi had gotten banned. I think this would have happened because none of the other students would have picked Gabriela up because none of them had a crush on her. This would have changed the outcome of the story because the main Character never would have gotten to talk to her. Brianne M.
ReplyDeleteI think if he didn't pick her up they wouldn't have talk and she wouldn't have like him and her knee would have dirt in it and and he would not hold her to the end of time
ReplyDelete-chantele
if the story a boy that liked gabriela knocked gabriela down to the ground and if the boy did not pick her up they would had never talked and gabriela maybe would have been mad but when he knocked her down he said sorry when he was bringing her to the nurse her knee was bleeding but there was gook in it and she was mad and the boy said that it was okay so he held her and said that he could hold her for the whole day
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If the narrator hadn't picked Gabriela up and taken her to the nurse she would ether think the boy was selfish for not helping her or she would faint there if no one picked her up. i think that would happen because I don't think any one else cared. that would change the story because then she wouldn't like him.
ReplyDelete-Caridad.
What would happen if Gabriela wasn't taken to the nurse is. she would be on the ground hurt and the game salugi would still be going on.Why that would happen is the narrator wouldn't be pick up Gabriela.She would stay there and the narrator wouldn't talk to her.isaiah
ReplyDeleteIf the main character didn't bring the girl to the nurse she would never like him ,her leg might got infected , and the boy would never talked to her .So the story would have a whole different story. Instead of having a happy ending it would be sad ending.
ReplyDelete-Noah C.
If the events in this story or situation had been changed the way the question says,the next thing to happen would probably be that they would'nt of never talked to each other. One reason this have happened is because they where afriad to talk to each other.Another reason this might have happened is because they might of been nerves imbarrased to do it . Even the ending may change.Here is what would probably happen they would of know them selfs better.selena
ReplyDeleteif gabreal didn't get pick up it would have been a bloody mess all over the place.
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